Bedroom Talk
What do u think of this story?
P.S- i'll give you a glimpse of the ending-when katie comes the next day she tells her how the world has changed. its the year 2012 and the world is full of war and strife and dullness. america pretty much went into a depression. and cheys the only one left with "color to her face". almost everyone she knew is dead. the rest is about chey trying to deal with this new world and in the end she brings all the dull ppl happiness. im working on it!
Public Comments
- That is one of the best stories I've ever read. Is that it? I'd like to read the ending if there's one.
- Good story. Can't decide if the hospital part is the scary dream or premoniton the little girl had or if the hospital is real and the little girl a memory.
- Tha'ts sooo cool! Where the ending? I want to finish it!
- Hm. Very captivating, well written, and emotional. It saddens me as I emote about a little girl that I'm missing right now, but fortunately not from an event as traumatic as this. I hope you're considering publishing this somewhere.
