Bedroom Talk
What do u think of this story?
i'm so glad you guys liked it! btw i'm only 12! haha so im gonna have plenty of time to become a better writter!
Public Comments
- i didnt read it but i "think" its too long =] i dont feel like reading...gimme a short riddle to challenge lol
- no one wants to read a long story like me
- this is a great story. Evidence is i want to know more
- wow...thats good!!!! it reminds me of another story i really like. But GOOD JOB! i like how you placed all the memories in the right spot, and it was easy to get a sense of the plot.
- nice but where is the rest?
- Good. Tell me what Katie's hiding!
- OK dangit! I love this story but I wanna know what her questions were and why tomorrow? I gotta know I just gotta! Tell me Tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
- WELL ITS NOT A JOKE OR A RIDDLE,,,,AND I JUST COULD NOT BE BOTHERED WITH IT ,,,,,boring
- that was realllyyy!!!good are you gonna add more to it cus if so i would looove to hear the rest.
- Excellent introduction. It kept my interest, and now I'm curious what happens next. The writing isn't amazing, but very good. With some basic writing education (or a little more if you already have had it) you could be a very succesful writer!
- what is katie hiding are you going to post more!??? dont end the story i got to KNOW~~!!!!
- love the story, you should make a part two cause i want to know what kaitie tells her..
- Good attempt! Here's a joke for you... The Escaped Convict An escaped convict broke into a house and tied up a young couple who had been sleeping in the bedroom. As soon as he had a chance, the husband turned to his voluptuous young wife, bound up on the bed in a skimpy nightgown, and whispered, "Honey, this guy hasn't seen a woman in years. Just cooperate with anything he wants. If he wants to have sex with you, just go along with it and pretend you like it. Our lives depend on it!" "Dear," the wife hissed, spitting out her gag, "I'm so relieved you feel that way because he just told me he thinks you have a nice tight butt!"
- it was awesome... I wanna know what Katie isn't telling her!!!!
- wow. thats really good. i wouldnt go putting this stuff on here though, well atleast not the rest of the story, someone could go get it published and take all the credit before you do. thats really good though. tell me what the title is, and when it comes out i will buy it. it will probably end up being on of my favorite books.
- wow! awesome story! i need to know what happens next!
- i loved the story and its not to long. I totally want to read more of it and find out what happened
- Pretty good but too long! 8/10!
- omggggg that was like the best story ever ...its soo interesting u have to finish that story ...did u write that on your own?..if u did you are such a good writer wooowwww..iam impressed its like a real book !
- awwww i want to know the end of the story! please post it!
- You are an extremely talented person. I hope this story is copyrighted.
- thats a great story......
